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Computationally Efficient Emulators for Earth System Models I: Producing Internal Variability
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  • Robert Link,
  • Corinne Hartin,
  • Cary Lynch,
  • Ben Bond-Lamberty,
  • Abigail Snyder
Robert Link
Pacific Northwest National Laboratory
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Corinne Hartin
Pacific Northwest National Laboratory

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Cary Lynch
Pacific Northwest National Laboratory
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Ben Bond-Lamberty
Pacific Northwest National Laboratory
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Abigail Snyder
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Abstract

The purpose of the paper is described.  Much valuable space is wasted repeating background material that is already in the introduction.  Too much detail is gone into; yet, bafflingly, the primary result of the paper is omitted.  The passive voice is used to do all of this.  By the end of it, readers still aren't sure if they actually want to read the paper.